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Capturing a glimpse of my reflection,
It is you who reflects back at me.
And it hurts..
knowing you still possess the power
To burn a hole through my soul..
They say time heals all wounds;
But memories linger,
And scars remain.
Acid tears they wont desist,
Deepest fears they do persist,
Of longing temptations I must resist,
For emotions such as this must not exist..
Apathetic heart beats quiescent,
Emotions retract while I lament,
For possession of a love so ambient,
Was bound to be seized by abolishment.
It is you who reflects back at me.
And it hurts..
knowing you still possess the power
To burn a hole through my soul..
They say time heals all wounds;
But memories linger,
And scars remain.
Acid tears they wont desist,
Deepest fears they do persist,
Of longing temptations I must resist,
For emotions such as this must not exist..
Apathetic heart beats quiescent,
Emotions retract while I lament,
For possession of a love so ambient,
Was bound to be seized by abolishment.
Literature
Love Means Nothing
Love means nothing
when you are a lonely soul,
It's just a word to make you believe
that your life has not reached it's final
goal.
Love means nothing
can't you see?
It's just a word to make you hatefully ask:
"Whats wrong with me?"
Love means nothing
it's just an empty word,
-A lie
-A wish
Hope and despair,
A word that hunts you down
like a nightmare.
Love means nothing when you are lonely
Literature
Words are easier to love
I found little notes
hidden between the
pages of novels
I only bothered
to read once.
Young poetry
and secret crushes
filled the slightly
discolored notebook
paper of a lonely girl
with veins that
pumped a writers
bloodwho built
a cage around
her own ink stained
[ h e a r t. ]
Literature
Insufferable Kiss
Your love was tainted
And I couldn't see it
Now I feel I've fallen
Down into a fiery pit
Why must it always fall apart like this?
You're through holding me down With your insuffrable kiss...
I'll never believe in you again
I'll never cry for you again
I can't take this anymore
I'll never be with you again
My heart has been filled
With the darkest rain
I'm beaten down again
And all I know is pain
Why must it aways hurt me like this?
You through holding me down with your insufferable kiss...
I'll never believe in you again
I'll never lie with you again
I can't take this anymore
I'll never be with you again
Like needles in my
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I was experimenting with rhyme a while ago and left it in my note pad. I just found this now and I decided to post it. I don't know how well I did with rhyme considering I don't use this style, it is very different to what i'm used to, but I decided to post it for various opinions of other writers.
To me, a piece set out like this kind of sucks out the emotion of the message in my opinion because when read out loud its like the writer had to make do with only a selected few words to express a certain emotion. Where as with free writing it is more intense as it flows the way the writer wants it to and are free to use any words or set up they like. However the play on words with rhyme makes it fun to read.
Either way, feed back would be nice, just out of curiosity of others opinions..
To me, a piece set out like this kind of sucks out the emotion of the message in my opinion because when read out loud its like the writer had to make do with only a selected few words to express a certain emotion. Where as with free writing it is more intense as it flows the way the writer wants it to and are free to use any words or set up they like. However the play on words with rhyme makes it fun to read.
Either way, feed back would be nice, just out of curiosity of others opinions..
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Not many people I've met here write meaningful short emotional poems filled with reflection and insight. Yours does pretty good in that