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Capturing a glimpse of my reflection,
It is you who reflects back at me.
And it hurts..
knowing you still possess the power
To burn a hole through my soul..
They say time heals all wounds;
But memories linger,
And scars remain.
Acid tears they wont desist,
Deepest fears they do persist,
Of longing temptations I must resist,
For emotions such as this must not exist..
Apathetic heart beats quiescent,
Emotions retract while I lament,
For possession of a love so ambient,
Was bound to be seized by abolishment.
It is you who reflects back at me.
And it hurts..
knowing you still possess the power
To burn a hole through my soul..
They say time heals all wounds;
But memories linger,
And scars remain.
Acid tears they wont desist,
Deepest fears they do persist,
Of longing temptations I must resist,
For emotions such as this must not exist..
Apathetic heart beats quiescent,
Emotions retract while I lament,
For possession of a love so ambient,
Was bound to be seized by abolishment.
Literature
Words are easier to love
I found little notes
hidden between the
pages of novels
I only bothered
to read once.
Young poetry
and secret crushes
filled the slightly
discolored notebook
paper of a lonely girl
with veins that
pumped a writers
bloodwho built
a cage around
her own ink stained
[ h e a r t. ]
Literature
Love Means Nothing
Love means nothing
when you are a lonely soul,
It's just a word to make you believe
that your life has not reached it's final
goal.
Love means nothing
can't you see?
It's just a word to make you hatefully ask:
"Whats wrong with me?"
Love means nothing
it's just an empty word,
-A lie
-A wish
Hope and despair,
A word that hunts you down
like a nightmare.
Love means nothing when you are lonely
Literature
Devilish Kiss
I see your lips, so rich,
As you draw near...
And your eyes are so full of passion,
It's clear...
There's nowhere I'd rather be,
Than right here...
And as you stalk your way towards me,
I feel a thrill of fear...
You light up the world,
Like you light up my life,
So come a little closer,
And give me that devilish kiss tonight
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
Just give me that devilish kiss tonight
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
I love it when your eyes are burning bright
It's alright, it's alright, it's alright
Just give me that devilish kiss tonight...
You lean so close to me,
And you bring me in...
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I was experimenting with rhyme a while ago and left it in my note pad. I just found this now and I decided to post it. I don't know how well I did with rhyme considering I don't use this style, it is very different to what i'm used to, but I decided to post it for various opinions of other writers.
To me, a piece set out like this kind of sucks out the emotion of the message in my opinion because when read out loud its like the writer had to make do with only a selected few words to express a certain emotion. Where as with free writing it is more intense as it flows the way the writer wants it to and are free to use any words or set up they like. However the play on words with rhyme makes it fun to read.
Either way, feed back would be nice, just out of curiosity of others opinions..
To me, a piece set out like this kind of sucks out the emotion of the message in my opinion because when read out loud its like the writer had to make do with only a selected few words to express a certain emotion. Where as with free writing it is more intense as it flows the way the writer wants it to and are free to use any words or set up they like. However the play on words with rhyme makes it fun to read.
Either way, feed back would be nice, just out of curiosity of others opinions..
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Not many people I've met here write meaningful short emotional poems filled with reflection and insight. Yours does pretty good in that