Deviation Actions
Literature Text
But delightedly, those forlorn by the habitual state of unconsciousness
Dwell beyond the outskirts of our embrace of knowledge.
Leave them apathetic to mental stimulation..
Rather; bask in thy rapture;
And permit me to join thee..
Wow, thank you for taking the time to share your gift of poetry writing with me. I am impressed with your vocabulary, it's not often that I see people write in formal and descriptive english as I sometimes like to do. I like writing for the most part using one word with a definition that summarises a whole sentence, making it short and sweet.
Also, I love what you've described in response to my piece, and I agree with your observations of the human race as today stands.
Find the less traveled path
Run, and let them drown
Be free
PERFECT!
Sadly though, I still don't feel free. In fact, I feel that the path less travelled in life is the harder way to go about things because you live against the grain of society, and someone or something always ends up getting in the way or knocking you when you're already down. The only upside is the self worth and liberation in ones self that is felt knowing you aren't just another sheep in the herd, and the character building that such a life choice brings.
Thanks again for your wonderful and refreshing response. You got me thinking again, and in turn helped regain some of my confidence back. 