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Desirous Avowal

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Savouring the breath of each word whispered from your lips,
I am left in desperate need to have the essence of your being beside me.

So tell me dearest to my heart,
Tell me that you love me..
Tell me my sweet serenity,
And tell me true,
That you need me as I do you.

For these confessions of the heart,
Stripping me of all sanity,
Weakening me with each blow,
Provide the strength in me,
To be all I want to be.

These silent suffocations,
That leave me gasping; beckoning,
Send a scorching blaze of heat through my body,
Burning the fire of my desire,
To be all you want me to be.
Written: 17/7/09

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jackiewelles's avatar
LOL no improvements suggested.

Very suggestive metaphors *grins slyly*